diff tests/test-tutorial.t @ 6885:2cad3669e4bb stable

tests: small fixes to the user-visible text in test-tutorial.t

--- a/tests/test-tutorial.t	Wed Oct 02 20:13:39 2024 +0400
+++ b/tests/test-tutorial.t	Wed Oct 02 20:30:06 2024 +0400
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
   adding file changes
   added 1 changesets with 1 changes to 1 files
 
-Later I add additional item to my list
+Later I add additional items to my list
 
   $ cat >> shopping << EOF
   > Egg
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
   > EOF
   $ hg commit -m "adding fruit"
 
-This history is very linear
+The history is completely linear so far
 
   $ hg log -G
   @  d85de4546133 (draft): adding fruit
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@
       }
 #endif
 
-But a typo was made in Babanas!
+But a typo was made in Bananas!
 
   $ hg export tip
   # HG changeset patch
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
   +Apple
 
 The faulty changeset is in the "draft" phase because it has not been exchanged with
-the outside. The first one has been exchanged and is "public" (immutable).
+the outside yet. The first one has been exchanged and is "public" (immutable).
 
   $ hg log -G
   @  d85de4546133 (draft): adding fruit
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@
       }
 #endif
 
-Hopefully. I can use `hg commit --amend` to rewrite my faulty changeset!
+Luckily, I can use `hg commit --amend` to rewrite my faulty changeset!
 
   $ sed -i'' -e s/Bananos/Banana/ shopping
   $ hg diff
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@
    Apple
   $ hg commit --amend
 
-A new changeset with the right diff replace the wrong one.
+A new changeset with the correct changes replaces the old one.
 
   $ hg log -G
   @  9d0363b81950 (draft): adding fruit
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@
 Getting rid of branchy history
 ----------------------------------
 
-While I was working on my list. Someone made a change remotely.
+While I was working on my list, someone made a change remotely.
 
   $ cd ../remote
   $ hg up -q
@@ -540,8 +540,8 @@
   o  7e82d3f3c2cb (public): Monthy Python Shopping list
   
 
-I have a new commit but I realize that don't want it. (Transport shop list does
-not fit well in my standard shopping list)
+I have a new commit but I realize that don't want it. (Transport shopping list
+does not fit well in my standard shopping list)
 
   $ hg prune . # "." is for working directory parent
   1 files updated, 0 files merged, 0 files removed, 0 files unresolved
@@ -632,7 +632,7 @@
   > Towel
   > Soap
   > EOF
-  $ hg ci -m 'bathroom stuff' -q # XXX remove the -q
+  $ hg ci -m 'bathroom stuff'
 
   $ sed -i'' -e 's/Spam/Spam Spam Spam/g' shopping
   $ hg ci -m 'SPAM SPAM'
@@ -652,13 +652,13 @@
 
 .. note:: We can't amend changeset 7e82d3f3c2cb or 9ca060c80d74 as they are immutable.
 
- I now want to push to remote all my changes except the bathroom one, which I'm
- not totally happy with yet. To be able to push "SPAM SPAM" I need a version of
- "SPAM SPAM" which is not a child of "bathroom stuff"
+I now want to push to remote all my changes except the bathroom one, which I'm
+not totally happy with yet. To be able to push "SPAM SPAM" I need a version of
+"SPAM SPAM" which is not a child of "bathroom stuff".
 
-You can use the 'grab' alias for that.
+You can use the 'grab' command for that.
 
-.. note: grab is an alias for `hg rebase --dest . --rev <target>; hg up <there>`
+.. note:: `grab` is an alias for `hg rebase --dest . --rev <target>; hg up <result>`
 
   $ hg up 'p1(10b8aeaa8cc8)' # going on "bathroom stuff" parent
   1 files updated, 0 files merged, 0 files removed, 0 files unresolved
@@ -761,7 +761,7 @@
       }
 #endif
 
-We have a new SPAM SPAM version without the bathroom stuff
+We have a new version of "SPAM SPAM" without the bathroom stuff
 
   $ grep Spam shopping  # enough spam
   Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam Spam
@@ -786,8 +786,8 @@
    Albatross
    Rat (rather a lot)
 
-To make sure I do not push unready changeset by mistake I set the "bathroom
-stuff" changeset in the secret phase.
+To make sure I do not push unfinished changeset by mistake I move the "bathroom
+stuff" changeset to the secret phase.
 
   $ hg phase --force --secret 10b8aeaa8cc8
 
@@ -802,7 +802,7 @@
   added 3 changesets with 3 changes to 1 files
   5 new obsolescence markers
 
-for simplicity sake we get the bathroom change in line again
+for simplicity's sake we get the bathroom change in line again
 
   $ hg pick 10b8aeaa8cc8
   picking 8:10b8aeaa8cc8 "bathroom stuff"
@@ -908,7 +908,7 @@
 ------------------
 
 This part is not written yet, but you can use either the `histedit` extension
-of the `uncommit` command to splitting a change.
+or the `uncommit` command to split a change.
 
   $ hg help uncommit
   hg uncommit [OPTION]... [FILE]...
@@ -1001,8 +1001,8 @@
   $ hg -R ../local/ showconfig phases
   [1]
 
-The localrepo does not have any specific configuration for `phases.publish`. It
-is ``true`` by default.
+The local repo does not have any specific configuration for `phases.publish`.
+It is ``true`` by default.
 
   $ hg pull local
   pulling from $TESTTMP/local (glob)
@@ -1030,7 +1030,7 @@
 
 We do not want to publish the "bathroom changeset". Let's rollback the last transaction.
 
-.. Warning: Rollback is actually a dangerous kind of internal command that is deprecated and should not be exposed to user. Please forget you read about it until someone fix this tutorial.
+.. warning:: `rollback` is actually a dangerous kind of internal command that is deprecated and should not be exposed to user. Please forget you read about it until someone fix this tutorial.
 
   $ hg rollback
   repository tip rolled back to revision 4 (undo pull)
@@ -1348,7 +1348,7 @@
 The older version 75954b8cd933 never ceased to exist in the local repo. It was
 just hidden and excluded from pull and push.
 
-.. note:: In hgview there is a nice dotted relation highlighting a44c85f957d3 as a new version of 75954b8cd933. this is not yet ported to ``hg log -G``.
+.. note:: In hgview there is a nice dotted relation highlighting a44c85f957d3 as a new version of 75954b8cd933. This is not yet ported to ``hg log -G``.
 
 There is now an **unstable** changeset in this history. Mercurial will refuse to
 share it with the outside: