# HG changeset patch
# User Arne Babenhauserheide <bab@draketo.de>
# Date 1332871439 -7200
# Node ID 8907a926954938f429d461bc08b992417bb08f47
# Parent  33b9cb1ce659d66915a0a6955aed97da6453a935
docs: polish for glossary

diff -r 33b9cb1ce659 -r 8907a9269549 docs/glossary.rst
--- a/docs/glossary.rst	Tue Mar 27 19:59:47 2012 +0200
+++ b/docs/glossary.rst	Tue Mar 27 20:03:59 2012 +0200
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 :obsolete marker:
     express a relation from 0..n new changesets to 1 old changeset
 :obsolete changesets:
-    non public changeset target of a obsolete marker
+    non public changeset which are target of a obsolete marker
 
 :unstable changeset:
     changeset not obsolete but with obsolete ancestor
@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@
     diff between a changeset and it's obsolete parent
 
 :obsolete-tip:
-    obsolete-descendants not obsolete themself.
+    obsolete-descendants which are not obsolete themselves.
 
 :conflicting changeset:
     multiple obsolete-tip for an obsolete changeset through diverging obsolete
-    marker (no changeset split marker)
+    markers (no changeset split marker)