changeset 2550:d8a48234efad stable

obshashrange: basic proof reading of the documentation

Nothing major but this should be a bit better.

--- a/hgext3rd/evolve/__init__.py	Mon Jun 05 10:21:26 2017 +0100
+++ b/hgext3rd/evolve/__init__.py	Wed Jun 07 00:12:08 2017 +0100
@@ -53,11 +53,11 @@
 Obsolescence Markers Discovery Experiment
 =========================================
 
-We are experimenting with a new protocol to discover common markers between a
-local and remote repository. This experiment is still at an early stage but is
-already raising better result than the previous version when usable.
-
-Large" repositories (hundreds of thousand) are currently unsupported. Some key
+We are experimenting with a new protocol to discover common markers between
+local and remote repositories. This experiment is still at an early stage but
+is already raising better results than the previous version (when usable).
+
+"Large" repositories (hundreds of thousand) are currently unsupported. Some key
 algorithm has a naive implementation with too agressive caching, creating
 memory consumption issue (this will get fixed).
 
@@ -77,14 +77,13 @@
   # (recommended 'yes' for server (default))
   obshashrange.warm-cache = no
 
-It is recommended to enable the blackbox extension to gather useful
-data about the experiment. It is shipped with Mercurial so no extra
-install needed.
+It is recommended to enable the blackbox extension. It gather useful data about
+the experiment. It is shipped with Mercurial so no extra install are needed.
 
     [extensions]
     blackbox =
 
-Finally some extra option are available to help tame the experimental
+Finally some extra options are available to help tame the experimental
 implementation of some of the algorithms:
 
     [experimental]