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        <h3>How you can benefit from Mercurial</h3>
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                It is <a href="/about/">fast and powerful</a>
                <p>Mercurial offers you the power and speed to efficiently handle <a href="/who/">projects of any size and kind</a><!--Reference: http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/ProjectsUsingMercurial -->. Every clone contains the whole project history, so committing, branching, tagging and merging are local operations which makes them fast and convenient. You can use a multitude of <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/Workflows">workflows</a> and easily enhance its functionality with <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/UsingExtensions">extensions</a>.</p>
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                It is <a href="/learn/">easy to learn</a><!-- point to a site which begins with a random "easy to learn" testimonial and then shows ways to learn Mercurial, from quick start to indepth -->
                <p>You can follow our simple <a href="/guide/">guide</a> to learn how to revision your documents with Mercurial, or just use the <a href="/quickstart/">quick start</a> to get going instantly. A short overview of Mercurial's decentralized model is also <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/UnderstandingMercurial">available</a>.<!--If you already know Subversion, please see <a href="mercurial_for_svn_users">Mercurial for svn users</a>.--></p>
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        <h3>How you can benefit from Mercurial</h3>
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                It is <a href="/about/">fast and powerful</a>
                <p>Mercurial offers you the power and speed to efficiently handle <a href="/who/">projects of any size and kind</a><!--Reference: http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/ProjectsUsingMercurial -->. Every clone contains the whole project history, so committing, branching, tagging and merging are local, fast and convenient. You can use a multitude of <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/Workflows">workflows</a> and easily enhance its functionality with <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/UsingExtensions">extensions</a>.</p>
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                It is <a href="/learn/">easy to learn</a><!-- point to a site which begins with a random "easy to learn" testimonial and then shows ways to learn Mercurial, from quick start to indepth -->
                <p>You can follow our simple <a href="/guide/">guide</a> to learn how to revision your documents with Mercurial, or just use the <a href="/quickstart/">quick start</a> to get going instantly. A short overview of Mercurial's decentralized model is also <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/UnderstandingMercurial">available</a>.<!--If you already know Subversion, please see <a href="mercurial_for_svn_users">Mercurial for svn users</a>.--></p>
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