diff src/en/index.html @ 20:7b2d898ec15a

Some polishing.

--- a/src/en/index.html	Fri Feb 13 15:55:54 2009 +0100
+++ b/src/en/index.html	Sun Feb 15 16:47:13 2009 +0100
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
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 					<h1>Work easier <br> Work faster</h1>
-					<h2>Benefit now from one of the easiest and fastest Source Control Management systems. Mercurial makes working with documents easier.</h2>
+					<h2>Mercurial is a free, distributed source control management tool. It offers you the power to efficiently handle projects of any size while using an easy and intuitive interface.</h2>
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 					<a class="download typeface-js" href="javascript:void(0);">
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 						<span>Windows XP | Vista | 7</span>
 					</a>
 					<dl>
-						<dt class="typeface-js">Requiurements</dt>
+						<dt class="typeface-js">Requirements</dt>
 						<dd>Python 2.5 (<a href="http://www.python.org">get python</a>)</dd>
 						
 						<dt>Another OS?<br><em>Get mercurial for:</em></dt>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 			
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-					<h3>How can you benefit from Mercurial?</h3>
+					<h3>How you can benefit from Mercurial</h3>
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 						<li class="i-1">
 							<h4><a href="javascript:void(0);">Download and install</a></h4>
@@ -71,8 +71,8 @@
 					</ol>
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-					<h3>Take a look at Mercurial</h3>
-					<!-- Flash Player should probably come here-->
+					<h3>Mercurial in action</h3>
+					<!-- Flash Player should definitely not come here!-->
 					<img src="images/tour.jpg" alt="">
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