# HG changeset patch
# User J. Lewis Muir <jlmuir@anl.gov>
# Date 1449165048 0
# Node ID db8000e703ada9c951219caf5c3ac7acc73b7115
# Parent  4fb6ffa192fef986c5d37b45fec6644ba5dc43bd
who: improve Facebook entry wording to be more formal

diff -r 4fb6ffa192fe -r db8000e703ad templates/who/index.html
--- a/templates/who/index.html	Thu Oct 29 20:57:23 2015 +0000
+++ b/templates/who/index.html	Thu Dec 03 17:50:48 2015 +0000
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 		<h1>Who uses Mercurial</h1>
 		<p><strong>Mercurial is a free, distributed source control management tool. It is currently used by many Open Source Projects such as...</strong></p>
         <h3>Facebook</h3>
-        Facebook is a social networking service. Well, you knew that. In 2014, Facebook engineers <a href="https://code.facebook.com/posts/218678814984400/scaling-mercurial-at-facebook/">chose Mercurial</a> due to its extensibility which enabled them to improve it to make it scale.</p>
+        The social networking service Facebook <a href="https://code.facebook.com/posts/218678814984400/scaling-mercurial-at-facebook/">chose Mercurial</a> in 2014 due to its extensibility and the ability to make it work at scale.</p>
         <p><a href="https://www.facebook.com">https://www.facebook.com</a></p>
         <h3>Python</h3>
         Python is a famous and widely adopted scripting language. Many applications like Mercurial, Django and Googles AppEngine are built on top of Python. In 2009 the Python developers <a href="http://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0374/">chose to move from Subversion to Mercurial</a>.</p>