changeset 330:009e21f04744

frontpage: minor shortening to make the first benefit more elegant (prune useless words). No change in meaning.

--- a/templates/frontpage.html	Fri Jul 02 01:22:25 2010 +0200
+++ b/templates/frontpage.html	Wed Jul 14 08:19:04 2010 +0200
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
         <!-- The three sections should now grow more compact as you go down, with power and speed the longest and just works only two simple, clean sentences. -->
             <li class="i-1">
                 It is <a href="/about/">fast and powerful</a>
-                <p>Mercurial offers you the power and speed to efficiently handle <a href="/who/">projects of any size and kind</a><!--Reference: http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/ProjectsUsingMercurial -->. Every clone contains the whole project history, so committing, branching, tagging and merging are local operations which makes them fast and convenient. You can use a multitude of <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/Workflows">workflows</a> and easily enhance its functionality with <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/UsingExtensions">extensions</a>.</p>
+                <p>Mercurial offers you the power and speed to efficiently handle <a href="/who/">projects of any size and kind</a><!--Reference: http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/ProjectsUsingMercurial -->. Every clone contains the whole project history, so committing, branching, tagging and merging are local, fast and convenient. You can use a multitude of <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/Workflows">workflows</a> and easily enhance its functionality with <a href="http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/UsingExtensions">extensions</a>.</p>
             </li>
             <li class="i-2">
                 It is <a href="/learn/">easy to learn</a><!-- point to a site which begins with a random "easy to learn" testimonial and then shows ways to learn Mercurial, from quick start to indepth -->