# HG changeset patch # User timeless # Date 1235821125 -3600 # Node ID bd8f446388478f7d4242f1b4ccdd6134fac5f869 # Parent 6d0cf2a2acad4317ecba56966f7d9f6996f4a547 help: miscellaneous language fixes diff -r 6d0cf2a2acad -r bd8f44638847 hgext/patchbomb.py --- a/hgext/patchbomb.py Sat Feb 28 12:25:14 2009 +0100 +++ b/hgext/patchbomb.py Sat Feb 28 12:38:45 2009 +0100 @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ each patchbomb message in a pager or sending the messages directly, it will create a UNIX mailbox file with the patch emails. This mailbox file can be previewed with any mail user agent which supports -UNIX mbox files, i.e. with mutt: +UNIX mbox files, e.g. with mutt: % mutt -R -f mbox @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ emailopts = [ ('a', 'attach', None, _('send patches as attachments')), ('i', 'inline', None, _('send patches as inline attachments')), - ('', 'bcc', [], _('email addresses of blind copy recipients')), + ('', 'bcc', [], _('email addresses of blind carbon copy recipients')), ('c', 'cc', [], _('email addresses of copy recipients')), ('d', 'diffstat', None, _('add diffstat output to messages')), ('', 'date', '', _('use the given date as the sending date')), diff -r 6d0cf2a2acad -r bd8f44638847 mercurial/changelog.py --- a/mercurial/changelog.py Sat Feb 28 12:25:14 2009 +0100 +++ b/mercurial/changelog.py Sat Feb 28 12:38:45 2009 +0100 @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ return text.replace('\0', '\\0') class appender: - '''the changelog index must be update last on disk, so we use this class + '''the changelog index must be updated last on disk, so we use this class to delay writes to it''' def __init__(self, fp, buf): self.data = buf diff -r 6d0cf2a2acad -r bd8f44638847 mercurial/cmdutil.py --- a/mercurial/cmdutil.py Sat Feb 28 12:25:14 2009 +0100 +++ b/mercurial/cmdutil.py Sat Feb 28 12:38:45 2009 +0100 @@ -940,10 +940,10 @@ raise util.Abort(_("revision matching date not found")) def walkchangerevs(ui, repo, pats, change, opts): - '''Iterate over files and the revs they changed in. + '''Iterate over files and the revs in which they changed. Callers most commonly need to iterate backwards over the history - it is interested in. Doing so has awful (quadratic-looking) + in which they are interested. Doing so has awful (quadratic-looking) performance, so we use iterators in a "windowed" way. We walk a window of revisions in the desired order. Within the diff -r 6d0cf2a2acad -r bd8f44638847 mercurial/commands.py --- a/mercurial/commands.py Sat Feb 28 12:25:14 2009 +0100 +++ b/mercurial/commands.py Sat Feb 28 12:38:45 2009 +0100 @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ The files will be added to the repository at the next commit. To undo an add before that, see hg revert. - If no names are given, add all files in the repository. + If no names are given, add all files to the repository. """ rejected = None @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ The --merge option remembers the parent of the working directory before starting the backout, then merges the new head with that changeset afterwards. This saves you from doing the merge by - hand. The result of this merge is not committed, as for a normal + hand. The result of this merge is not committed, as with a normal merge. See \'hg help dates\' for a list of formats valid for -d/--date. @@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ If you supply a command it will be used for automatic bisection. Its exit status will be used as flag to mark revision as bad or good. In case exit status is 0 the revision is marked as good, 125 - skipped, 127 (command not - found) - bisection will be aborted and any other status bigger than 0 will + found) - bisection will be aborted; any other status bigger than 0 will mark revision as bad. """ def print_result(nodes, good): @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ """create a changegroup file Generate a compressed changegroup file collecting changesets not - found in the other repository. + known to be in another repository. If no destination repository is specified the destination is assumed to have all the nodes specified by one or more --base @@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ file names or -I/-X filters. If no commit message is specified, the configured editor is started to - enter a message. + prompt you for a message. See 'hg help dates' for a list of formats valid for -d/--date. """ @@ -653,13 +653,13 @@ Mark dest as having copies of source files. If dest is a directory, copies are put in that directory. If dest is a file, - there can only be one source. + the source must be a single file. By default, this command copies the contents of files as they stand in the working directory. If invoked with --after, the operation is recorded, but no copying is performed. - This command takes effect in the next commit. To undo a copy + This command takes effect with the next commit. To undo a copy before that, see hg revert. """ wlock = repo.wlock(False) @@ -1023,7 +1023,7 @@ probably with undesirable results. Use the --git option to generate diffs in the git extended diff - format. Read the diffs help topic for more information. + format. For more information, read hg help diffs. """ revs = opts.get('rev') @@ -1857,8 +1857,8 @@ files and full commit message is shown. NOTE: log -p may generate unexpected diff output for merge - changesets, as it will compare the merge changeset against its - first parent only. Also, the files: list will only reflect files + changesets, as it will only compare the merge changeset against + its first parent. Also, the files: list will only reflect files that are different from BOTH parents. """ @@ -2312,10 +2312,10 @@ a file, there can only be one source. By default, this command copies the contents of files as they - stand in the working directory. If invoked with --after, the + exist in the working directory. If invoked with --after, the operation is recorded, but no copying is performed. - This command takes effect in the next commit. To undo a rename + This command takes effect at the next commit. To undo a rename before that, see hg revert. """ wlock = repo.wlock(False) diff -r 6d0cf2a2acad -r bd8f44638847 tests/test-help.out --- a/tests/test-help.out Sat Feb 28 12:25:14 2009 +0100 +++ b/tests/test-help.out Sat Feb 28 12:38:45 2009 +0100 @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ The files will be added to the repository at the next commit. To undo an add before that, see hg revert. - If no names are given, add all files in the repository. + If no names are given, add all files to the repository. options: @@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ The files will be added to the repository at the next commit. To undo an add before that, see hg revert. - If no names are given, add all files in the repository. + If no names are given, add all files to the repository. options: @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ probably with undesirable results. Use the --git option to generate diffs in the git extended diff - format. Read the diffs help topic for more information. + format. For more information, read hg help diffs. options: